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The Moon
Contributed by
Muinanyere
on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 07:36:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My old companion, my friend
So many nights I have witnessed your beauty
You are the only one left in the end
When Im with you Im free
As parting clouds reveal you unto me
We begin a slow dance
Ebbing and flowing like waves upon the sea
With all of them I never had a chance
My heart flies to you
Carried upon a zephyr
In this world those I trust are few
You are my only cure
And as I lay bare my heart
You dip behind the clouds once more
Concealing my secret fears as youve done from the start
I cannot say what the future holds in store
I am lost in your luminous glow
From me all hope they stole
And you alone know my secret sorrow
In the depths of my soul
Copyright ©
Muinanyere
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2008-05-22 07:36:03]
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Re: The Moon
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:07:20 AM AEST
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OMg now you done made me cry....... I relate to this so deeply. A beautiful write. Dancing with the moon what a date. Flowing lovely write I simply loved it.
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Re: The Moon
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:51:24 AM AEST
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This is pure perfection... absolutely love it... Great write..
Jenni |
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Re: The Moon
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 11:16:47 AM AEST
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Very captivating piece. I never looked at the moon that way before.
Deadwriter
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Re: The Moon
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by safetyinnumbers on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 11:52:45 AM AEST
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Nice poem....I was reflecting on the moon last night....we had a full moon last night (in Australia)....and this write is a beautiful reflection.....Good work |
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Re: The Moon
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by Arijadna77 on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 04:06:28 PM AEST
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| colorful...tender...flowing like river...i enjoyed reading... |
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Re: The Moon
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by holy on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 10:40:37 PM AEST
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| very touching too, great job. |
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Re: The Moon
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by eeeitak on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 10:53:37 AM AEST
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| This is just... Wow. You really have a way of expressing yourself through words. Great write :D |
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