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Through the trees...
Contributed by
ZiggyB
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Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:37:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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~~*~~
Through the trees
Hear that wind blow through the trees
I thoughtI heard my name
And quickly turned myself about
To seek from whence it came
Could my mind be that much cruel
To stage such a charade
It lent me to this awkwardness
And the spectacle I made
Then softly whispered at my ear
It drove me quite insane
Perhaps it was not you at all
Just a fallingof the rain
The sound was so much like your voice
That I was all but sure
So soft and sweet, the way it called
And it resonated pure
For me there is no space or time
Where my mind, can get to rest
And listen to these words I speak
For now I will confess
I dont know how to handle this
As I have said before
But when it comes to loving you
I will always want you more
~~*~~
2008-04-20
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Re: Through the trees...
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by safetyinnumbers on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 10:47:00 PM AEST
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Nice write....haunting and beautiful... |
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Re: Through the trees...
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by SilverRain on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:24:13 AM AEST
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| Beautiful piece of work! Alive and sensitive. |
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Re: Through the trees...
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by eternalsunshine on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 02:08:41 AM AEST
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| awwww, that was just beautiful...i wish it was written for me ;)...nice writing... |
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Re: Through the trees...
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 11:05:20 AM AEST
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Ahh this is so precious....The things the wind says to you!! I hear it allt he time.. Great write... I lived it..
Jenni |
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