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-Blue Beneath the Sky-
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 02:01:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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i found your eyes,
in the utmost times,
in times of pain
swords ferocious disguise,
slashing in each direction
forcefully tearing us down,
exiling to a land,filed memories
like two lonely rocks,
blue, beneath the sea
i found your eyes,
over distant lands,
through vivid envisage
dreaming away months,
lamenting on loss
time left untouched,
tears filed months
though clear as light,
blue we were
above, the skies
i found your eyes,
once touched me so deep,
your silent, gentle words
embedding my heart...
clearing its veil,
dancing me over stellar light,
your picturesque lines
lifting me high...
will your heart mend?
and find its way back...?
for me to plant a kiss
between phoenix palms,open skies..
until a time, to meet...?
rain will sprinkle
my eyes..
loving you always
blue, beneath the sky
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eternalsunshine
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2008-05-23 02:01:03]
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Re: -Blue Beneath the Sky-
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 06:07:52 AM AEST
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| This was really beautiful, good write. |
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Re: -Blue Beneath the Sky-
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 01:22:16 PM AEST
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There is nothing more romantic than to look into special eyes. Your words are so romanticly painful. Great write.
Mike |
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