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Religion Hallucination
Contributed by
ratty
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Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 08:49:00 AM in AEST
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What would you do, when you're a stranger in the cold
What would you do when you live in a grave that's already sold
You thank, god, it's raised religion
Fantasy's of how I could change it, Hallucination
The deeper you fall in the dark eyes of luv
Reviewing you're birth, mid-age to final touch, real love
The mountain crosses our sight before dawn, my love one
Still I don't know who 2 trust, while ratt, my only son
Out on the streets, we pay well for junks & thiefs
I'm out here on my own, against all believes, to me
The view you see is a mix of thoughts you've mixed together
In heaven, you've got holy pictures that's better forever
What would hell be like, the same *****ty picture
Soldier on a suffer mission
BUT we're proud of the country
now YOU go ahead and believe that
Copyright ©
ratty
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2008-05-23 08:49:00]
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Re: Religion Hallucination
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 04:26:06 AM AEST
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A perfect description of the world today that surrounds us...you did a wonderful job with this piece..
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Re: Religion Hallucination
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by Muinanyere on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 06:02:20 AM AEST
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| I really liked this poem, good write. |
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