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Cry
Contributed by
6whiteRoses
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Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:43:27 AM in AEST
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How do I feel
I really don't know
I just put on a smile
And go with the flow
I try not to think
Because it causes me pain
Reminds me of heartache
Tears start falling like rain
So what do I do
When I don't think I'll get by
I just sit here and pray
And hope I don't cry
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Re: Cry
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by Muinanyere on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:45:49 AM AEST
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| I feel like this everyday, this is a wonderful poem.Good write. |
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Re: Cry
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 06:42:13 AM AEST
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Oh I felt this and feel every ounce and know exactly how you are feeling. Call me water works!! I am not a crying person either whats up with that??
Keep telling yourself it is hard now but something better is coming even though we do not see it at the moment.
Incredible write and I wish you well.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Cry
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 07:12:03 AM AEST
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I have felt like this at times and it is hard to get through. But keep your chin up. This was really well written and you just let your raw emotions out. Great job.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Cry
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 01:54:06 PM AEST
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| Great write, it was very sad but crying is actually good for you it helps you feel better so don't care to cry |
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