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Dust in the wind
Contributed by
HellRaiser
on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 06:10:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The dusts of life surrounds me
swirling like a tornado of time,
clinging to my skin
gradually covering me
bit by bit
until I myself become
the dust that dances in the wind.
Copyright ©
HellRaiser
... [
2008-05-24 06:10:12]
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Re: Dust in the wind
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by Muinanyere on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 06:11:58 AM AEST
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| I love this, very good write. |
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Re: Dust in the wind
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 06:48:57 AM AEST
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I just got rid of dust so think Ill be dancing in the rain instead lol.....
I loved this write though. It spoke to me!!
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Re: Dust in the wind
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 07:00:16 AM AEST
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WOW!! Amazing write..... great use of metaphors.. I love it...
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