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WARNING!!
Contributed by
alibof10
on
Monday, 26th May 2008 @ 04:29:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Lonely in this planet
Living alone and silent
Fitting no place at all
This aint different than home
Nothing seems right
I thought, good people here, I just might
But no one understands
What roams the inner minds
No one succeeds
Or tries feeling the needs
The darkness that roams
Inside the hidden homes
The darkness that dictates
Even if u calculate
Theres no escaping
The darkness invading
Theres nothing but kneeling
To the dark and consume the feeling
Darkness shall invade
Be ware and well prepared
For no matter what you do
You can't escape, you fool!
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alibof10
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2008-05-26 16:29:58]
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Re: WARNING!!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th May 2008 @ 05:59:17 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. |
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Re: WARNING!!
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by Dustin on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 03:38:50 AM AEST
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Very Nice
I can see imagery of my own life pains
no escape you are right
a fool to our demise
no light at this tunnel
called life |
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Re: WARNING!!
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by BRIDGI on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 12:08:01 AM AEST
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| wow...lol..well the title fits...its really down to earth...kinda harsh but its tru....i love it =D |
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