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gentle the night
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
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Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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what scence can youn view
for my seeing is week
expect that i could hear the sould of the nightingale
making a beautiful tone
earful to the drone of the beetles
put my ears down
heard no voice
but the howling of the wind through the trees
i mimic to the hoot of the owl
the cry of the nightjar frightend me
nevertheless i gave in not to threat
for i have my shadow
all i need as a companion
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Re: gentle the night
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 08:35:25 AM AEST
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| your words are so deep in this brillant write, thanks for sharing and welcome to the site, |
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Re: gentle the night
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by olasunkanmi on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 07:13:07 PM AEST
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| Really nice of you commenting on my work though not new on the site |
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Re: gentle the night
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:46:17 AM AEST
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Your words just flowed, I could picture a night right before my eyes. This poem was wonderful.
yours Kolbrún |
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Re: gentle the night
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 06:22:36 PM AEST
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| beautiful:) hugs nessa |
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