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~Soaring High~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 11:58:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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~~^~~
Soaring high across the sky
On a soft and wispy cloud
Away from the cares and fears of the world
And of the maddening crowd
All alone and on my own,
My desire is to dance.
I feel so free; its how I need to be,
I think I am in a trance.
While up here I have no fear,
My only wish is to sing.
I dont want to know til I have to go,
What tomorrow will bring?
At this time, I will just rhyme
And think of a world so neat.
Id like to stay just one more day
Ive got the world at my feet!
~~^~~
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Jenni_K
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2008-05-27 11:58:13]
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Re: ~Soaring High~
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 12:12:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful Jen!! I so loved this write uplifting and incredible. Loved the pic too
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Re: ~Soaring High~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 12:47:53 PM AEST
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Even mo beautifull than the first time I read it.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,peace, joy, soaring,
emy |
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Re: ~Soaring High~
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 09:30:18 PM AEST
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This is great. Soar on!
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Soaring High~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 10:08:21 PM AEST
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| Great write Jen, keep flying.............Mike |
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Re: ~Soaring High~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 09:34:55 AM AEST
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wow an exquisite enchanting uplifting write.. this is simply as you stated happy.. it makes the reader feel on top of the world and gives one a feeling of contentness.. lovely write
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: ~Soaring High~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 05:53:22 AM AEST
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You carry us all along as you soar!
Uplifting is a great description! |
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