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The last lost soul
Contributed by
ratty
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Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 04:24:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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The days of filth are gone
Nowhere 2 run, nowhere 2 run
Sun is joy, air, all-right
Travel tonight,
I travel tonight, that's right, I be
Just someone, like U
U know it's just like me
Oh, no
Last, lost soul
Last, lost soul
- - - - - - - - -
Do I need 2 feel sorry 4 myself
Regret my own sentence
Do I need 2 wish anything
Something that's already givin'
What's this life without death
At a young age
W/ a smile
and w/ a greater laugh
Copyright ©
ratty
... [
2008-05-28 04:24:58]
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Re: The last lost soul
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 05:00:30 AM AEST
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That is exactly how I want to go out....with a smile and a laugh. I like the format that you used...you did another good job.
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Re: The last lost soul
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 07:10:08 AM AEST
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This was good.
You did a great job expressing what you felt.
And thank you for your comment. It means a lot.
Take care
Christina |
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