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Sacrifice
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 12:18:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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He who watches the sun rise
Shall fall to the floor.
Eyes wide and full of rage
Too bright for mankind's
Fragile ones of the dust
Shall a tree cause shade?
Ahh yes, a little blessed nature
Comes into play.
It shall be burned by the sons
Of the brothers!
No!
It shall not!
Chained to a trunk with no food for days
A much weaker man now stands before
His fellow peasants
The strong shall always survive
To dominate and destroy
What is so beautiful
And what helps keep peace of mind
The living
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2008-05-29 12:18:38]
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Re: Sacrifice
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by flower-tree on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 12:28:43 PM AEST
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| hey! i like this, but i feel like you use "shall" too much. |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 09:41:19 PM AEST
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I like this...you did a good job...keep it up..I look forward to reading more of your work.
Rich |
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