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i woke up
Contributed by
breezyweezy
on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 04:55:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you walk across the room
to the open window
looking all sad
and alone
i come over and wrap
my arms around your waist
you look up at me with those brown eyes
i could almost melt in
you look back to the open veiw
then i squeeze ur sides as if to say "hey"
but no words were spoken
then you look back at me and you kiss me
and then we pause in awkward silence
then i kiss you back
i let go of you and u go sit on the chair
you look at me with intense eyes and say
"i love you"
then, when the best part was yet to come
i woke up
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2008-05-30 04:55:33]
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Re: i woke up
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 11:30:29 AM AEST
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Nice work. Hopefully next time you sleep it will continue from there.
Deadwriter
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