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~Enchantress~
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:25:36 PM in AEST
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When daylight softly brushes through the pines,
wet with dew of Heavens Tears.
The shadows of the night will soon creep,
making the world transform into a soft slumber.
Humbling the moments of lost time, another day has come to rest.
Who would defy a Celestial Spirit, her aura shining of gold?
Her heart bare and clean filled with desires and dreams
and her love softly spilling over and running with the streams.
Her voice the soft whisper people dream of hearing near their pillow.
Her eyes a set of angelic windows, looking once may take you away.
Away to a place where she silently strolls, taking very few with her along the way.
A place where love comes softly, like the pine needles falling to the forest floor.
How could one not see such beauty and ignore the soul beneath the outer core?
A poetic note like musical notes on paper, she sings, shares her heart.
Listen closer and you may hear the song, dancing amongst the springs first vine.
The vines of hope, love and light, a souls release and treasures shared.
A bud soon to bring forth the first rose of June, to dance to the choir of midnight.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-05-30 12:25:36]
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Re: ~Enchantress~
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:45:05 PM AEST
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Awesome graphics and incredible writing.
huggs, smiles, peace,
emy |
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Re: ~Enchantress~
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 01:17:01 PM AEST
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beautifully written, truly "enchatning" a lovely wrte, 1 you should be very proud of
love
pix xxx |
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Re: ~Enchantress~
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by dougnut on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 09:02:52 PM AEST
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Wow Shelby
Increible Expressive write KUDOS
Top Marks
Words Place in the right Order to create
wonderful Poetry.
Not Been here for a while Thi is the first poem I commrnted on.
Hiugs Doug. |
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Re: ~Enchantress~
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by flower-tree on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 01:27:53 PM AEST
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you are INCREDIBLY talented.
i enjoyed this soooo much. :) |
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