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The Darkest of Friends
Contributed by
tundrahydra
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Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 04:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Out of the darkness from a world of night
He walks to my side with power and might
A black soul with demented ideals
Grim smiles powered by cogs and wheels
A twisted machine of death and hate
Taking away all that makes you great
Onyx aura with a heart of ice
Destruction of all that is beauty or nice
He is the reaper of sadness
The leader of lost souls
His very presense is sure to turn your bowels
Corruption and decay lie in his wake
Disembling all that man can make
He is my closest and dearest friend
With me from the start till the dire end
He is the dark side of my moon
Pray you dont see him any time soon
In the shadows of my mind he will wait
Till the time comes for discontent and hate
Long we have been at odds in my head
But now our conflict is over and dead
An agreement we struck, a bargain persay
He will behave till I ask o him to come play
And with the fury of a thousand storms he will answer the call
Together we are invincible no man can make us fall
Fear us for we are the brothers unite
Death deals, shadow stalkers of night
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tundrahydra
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Re: The Darkest of Friends
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by shelby on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 04:56:19 AM AEST
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You have written a poem showing great talent. It all fit and read perfectly, the message is also beyond words. I loved the metaphor in its lines.
Bravo and if I could give a double five star I would.
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Re: The Darkest of Friends
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by Drunken_Koala on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 04:23:26 PM AEST
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