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Move Over
Contributed by
karoody
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Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
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Yeah, I saw the way you looked at me
You think me foolish, naive
Well honey, hold on
This might hurt a little
I've still got tricks up my sleeve
The naive little girl doesn't live here,
She never did
I just let her get on stage once in a while
That's me waiting behind the wall
You think you know everything
Quiet dear, there's a lot of me you never took the time to see
The woman inside is stronger than you know
I let you inside my world
But you can't follow the rules
So I must show you the door.
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-03-14 13:40:00]
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Re: Move Over
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by roisin on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 04:18:25 PM AEST
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great strength in your words...
rosie |
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Re: Move Over
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by roisin on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 04:18:33 PM AEST
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great strength in your words...
rosie |
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Re: Move Over
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 06:05:45 PM AEST
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WAY TO GO, GRRL!!!.... Great write...
Jenni |
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Re: Move Over
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 08:57:04 PM AEST
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Very strong your soul u bare in this one. I found the stage part a bit confusing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Move Over
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by karoody on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 11:34:56 PM AEST
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| when i refer to the stage, i am speaking of wearing a mask. it's a cheap trick, but if someone takes cheap shots....eye for an eye. |
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Re: Move Over
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by venkat on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 02:45:03 AM AEST
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| yea, this is also wise act, Beware there are thieves and hynas who can even steal the innocent laughs of children.. who can just wear the masks of guardian angels to enter into others dream worlds.. venkat |
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Re: Move Over
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 03:25:46 AM AEST
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| excellent excellent excellent, right it out girlfriend!!!... |
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Re: Move Over
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 11:12:19 PM AEST
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| nice job venting kara, poems written in a mood can be so interesting when you read them at a later date, my favorite line of yours is,"Quiet dear, there's a lot of me you never took the time to see", hugs n' love to you and yours, always nessa |
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