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All alone
Contributed by
MrSelfDistruct
on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 12:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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All alone, dark
Lost in a dream which I cannot be found.
Ive felt this way, not until now
But deep, Ive always known.
I tried to hide it, but my face shows the emotion
Why do I know what I want
But I cant reach this beyond
Ive faced all my demons inside my head
And Ive realized that everything
Wont get better
I could have the world
And Id throw it away
All alone, dark
Ive felt this way, forever
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MrSelfDistruct
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2008-06-02 12:45:33]
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Re: All alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 12:49:42 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Well for not knowing as you stated.... I find you did a darn good job with this.
A wonderful start, I will watch for more. Lost in a dream which I cannot be found........ that is so sad.
You are found right here right now. Keep writing.
Michelle |
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Re: All alone
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by The_Callif on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 03:40:38 PM AEST
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Seems like you know what you're doing to me.
Never would have guessed that this was your first poem.
Hope to see more great writes from you.
-Callif |
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Re: All alone
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by Puppy on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 01:03:56 AM AEST
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Welcome to the site! This is a great poem,i think you've caputred your feelings beautifully!
Well done i looking forward to reading more from you!
Puppy :) |
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