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~ We danced~
Contributed by
shelby
on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 01:11:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We danced in the shadows of our sorrow
We strolled along the ocean edge, waves crashing on the rocks near shore. The sand beneath our feet soft, spreading off until, we couldnt see it anymore.
The moon turned to smile at us, painting us in her angelic glow. Our love floating with the waves and wind, west ward as she blows.
We danced in the shadows of our sorrow, We danced in the mist of the rain. We danced in delight of new moments. We danced in times of undaunted restrain.
Our union but an ember, burning lightly in a stolen night. The clouds overtook our moon and left us without light.
In the midst of eves dark slumber, we found our way once more. And in the heat of passion we knelt near the oceans floor.
We danced in the shadows of our sorrow. We danced in the mist of the rain. We danced in delight of new moments. We danced in times of undaunted restrain.
It was the rolling of the thunder, and the crash of turbulent seass. The sound of raindrops falling, natures tune dropped near our feet.
and we loved, we whispered and we danced.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-06-02 13:11:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~ We danced~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 04:44:08 AM AEST (User
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A most beautiful portrayal shel, fragile, and
it's cadence is very alluring, another lucid
emotion you've penned here, touching the
readers imagination while enchanting the
heart . . .
((((Michelle)))) |
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Re: ~ We danced~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 05:53:59 AM AEST (User
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Just beautiful Michelle. The words pull you in till you feel like you are right there with them. Just beautiful.............Mike |
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Re: ~ We danced~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 07:04:45 AM AEST (User
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Sigh..ever so beautiful.....
Jenni |
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