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hurt rejoiced
Contributed by
jkjo
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Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 01:59:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Immortalized those moments
the sand, the water and your touch
the breeze striking happy notes
music rhyming souls within
how much I wished it didn't end
the hearts so smiling and the water sparkling
never before did nature
seep into me so well
I loved myself more than ever earlier
something hurt me and that was
when you called it fun
while I was living a life
for you it was just another day
and me, I flew into the skies
I melted, I gave away
still I believe
no matter what earth delights
to feel my bare feet
and winds do long to play with my hair
I rejoice, I am here
by God's grace I value the hours
I relish the time
I thank Him abound!
Copyright ©
jkjo
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2008-06-02 13:59:18]
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Re: hurt rejoiced
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by socko008 on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 06:08:23 PM AEST
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| I like this, i feel likeit would be easier to read if there were punctuation though. Good images and word usage. |
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Re: hurt rejoiced
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by jkjo on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 03:37:22 AM AEST
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| Thank you for the appreciation and the suggestion..next time I will do that . |
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