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Love So Long Removed
Contributed by
the_callif
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Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 04:14:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When love is all you write about,
What more is left once love burns out?
If fiery passions lose their spark,
Is there hope beyond the dark?
My love run out, I'm left alone,
No longer beats my heart of stone,
But I can still recall a time,
When burning love lit up my rhyme.
Although my memories are sweet,
I strive to find such love repeat,
For hungers may be filled all ways,
But to return in later days.
Copyright ©
the_callif
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2008-06-02 16:14:03]
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Re: Love So Long Removed
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 04:48:20 PM AEST
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A lovely flowing write, nicely done.
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Re: Love So Long Removed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 05:49:10 AM AEST
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| I liked your poem. I guess I always looked at love poetry as that special love that lasts an eternity. I hope you find that...........Mike |
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Re: Love So Long Removed
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 07:51:57 AM AEST
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Wow...Very beautiful...and interesting write...
Loved it..
Jenni |
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