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Clinging to Love
Contributed by
socko008
on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 06:25:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Suddenly filled with a memory
I don't want to have.
Sunken dreams and destroyed hopes,
loves lost forever to the summer stars.
Feelings held captive by the heart,
unable to let go of past emotions.
Every new sensation a reminder
of notions gone;
that risk and vulnerability
are too dangerous to face,
real life too real to live in.
And the memory of a touch,
too vivid to withstand in its absence.
That life since you left is constant suffering,
a memory I don't want to have,
as each day turns colder and shorter,
and the night tightens its grip
'round my dreams.
Happiness is forgetting your absence.
Sadness is remebering you're gone.
Copyright ©
socko008
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2008-06-02 18:25:34]
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Re: Clinging to Love
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by Puppy on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 12:53:32 AM AEST
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This poem is something that i can really relate to and i completely understand how you feel. its beautifully written (must admit it made me a little teary) great write!!!!!
Puppy :) |
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Re: Clinging to Love
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 02:06:01 AM AEST
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I so felt this, the line touching on the stars I loved.
It is beautiful.
The ending is heart wrenching... Goodbyes are so often bitter-sweet.
Michelle |
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Re: Clinging to Love
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by CatKin on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 11:23:00 PM AEST
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| Beautifully bitter-sweet. A brilliant write. Thank you for sharing it. |
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