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The fires getting closer there is no way out
Contributed by
blackrose233
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Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 02:22:41 AM in AEST
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Fire all around me, I cant get out
I cant move forward there are blazes in my face
I cant turn back now that paths been erased
Stuck in the middle, stuck in a rhyme
Afraid of tomorrow and running out of time
Screaming for help but they all seem to be blind
Looking past what I cant see, will I ever be free
The fires getting closer there is no way out
I will just lay down now to tired to try anymore
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2008-06-03 02:22:41]
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Re: The fires getting closer there is no way out
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 08:04:04 AM AEST
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There is something about the fire and flame and being stuck that is so intense in this write.
The question will I ever be free....... incredible thought provoking write you have here. Keep up the good work I will stop by to read.
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Re: The fires getting closer there is no way out
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 09:30:27 AM AEST
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Amazing analogy....You have just described my life!!
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Re: The fires getting closer there is no way out
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by dummie on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 10:15:55 AM AEST
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| this is a good use of metaphor. |
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