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THE DANCER IN WHITE
Contributed by
jsringo
on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 10:12:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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She's a dancer dressed in white
When I close my eyes she's there
She dances for my pure delight
I look for her most every night
Long white dress and long black hair
She said her dance is just for me
Eagerly I await her show
No one dances quite like she
Should I touch or let her be
Should I keep silent or let her know
She always leaves me right at dawn
No dance is like the one before
She shows some skin then It's gone
A glimpse of flesh then It's withdrawn
My poor heart yearns for more and more
Will she appear and call my name
Can I keep her for my own
Will tomorrow be the same
Will she flicker like a dying flame
Or will her heart just turn to stone
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jsringo
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2008-06-03 10:12:17]
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Re: THE DANCER IN WHITE
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 10:16:22 AM AEST
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Bravo!! I loved this. It is delightful to read leaving many images and the flow is perfect, just like the dance.
Michelle |
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Re: THE DANCER IN WHITE
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by dummie on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 10:39:07 AM AEST
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| amazing imagery, love the rhyme scheme and the way the poem flows. good job. |
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Re: THE DANCER IN WHITE
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 04:47:22 PM AEST
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Great flow...beautiful imagery.....I loved this..
Jenni |
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Re: THE DANCER IN WHITE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 05:04:17 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful dream. Great write. Each line pulling you to the next..........Mike |
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Re: THE DANCER IN WHITE
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by eeeitak on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:55:25 PM AEST
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amazing amazing amazing.
you are very talented :] !! |
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