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A Fractured Mind
Contributed by
Lady_Daisy
on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 05:42:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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Scattered thoughts
Of a fractured mind,
These dreams they rip us apart
Regrettably feeling unfulfilled
Our paths, they divide.
But we know they will intertwine,
Only enough to take just one glimpse
As we walk by consumed in our pathetic lives
Hoping to catch that one glimpse the next day.
LD
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Lady_Daisy
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2008-06-03 17:42:59]
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Re: A Fractured Mind
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 01:12:27 AM AEST
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Lovely write Lady D.
You said so much within few words truly poetic to me.
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Re: A Fractured Mind
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:13:20 AM AEST
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This poem keeps pulling me back to read it... I don't know why..Maybe...just maybe, I need to gather my thoughts....
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