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Can't Explain It.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 10:23:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Everyday I contemplate my issues at hand
Trying to find the reasons
And trying to understand
But I'm stuck with a heart that I can't explain
Carrying a love that I cannot contain
I speak in quiet tones
Holding on with broken bones
Wishing upon faded stars
Still I have no answers
Only a tired soul decorated with scars
And I'm hanging on every word you said
Repeating each one inside my head
You pushed me away more times than I care to reveal
Still this love for you is the only thing I can feel
I should have walked away a long time ago
But my heart won't move, it won't let me go
And the pain of your rejection is truly killing me
Punished by my own devotion
I'm like a slave inside my own skin begging to be set free
Everyday I wake up in a thousand pieces
Open wounds bleeding the love my heart releases
Still I find a way to stitch myself together
And I'm so afraid that I might be in love with you forever
I tell myself I need to move on
And reminding myself that your already gone
But I can't control this love that I feel
And if it's lasted this long then it has to be real
I can't explain it, it can't be put in words
And I know I seem crazy and this sounds so absurd
My heart has taken complete control
No matter how hard I try to let go
This love I have for you overrides the pain in my soul
I have no answers, I don't know what else to do
I'm stuck with a heart I can't explain...
And an undying love for you.
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bleedthelove
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2008-06-03 22:23:57]
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Re: Can't Explain It.
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 01:34:58 AM AEST
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Truly a heart jerker of a write here. It is so hard when people takes others feelings and their heart and shred them.
Still I find a way to stitch myself together........ yes that is what you do.. Move on life is about goodbyes sadly, but who needs people around who are going to cause pain right?? You don't.
Hang in there sweety.
Beautiful write
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Re: Can't Explain It.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:12:44 AM AEST
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| When I first started reading, I almost backed out. But each line drew me to the next. You have friends here, we are family. So take it for what it's worth-YOU are the answer to all of your questions. Life is a fantasy- It is what you make it. Don't stop your heart, but don't kill who you are...............Mike |
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Re: Can't Explain It.
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 08:05:47 AM AEST
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What a heart-breaking write... I agree with both Michelle and Mike... hang in there...
Jenni |
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Re: Can't Explain It.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 10:07:15 PM AEST
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wow this is another tragically beautious write.. its so heartfelt and touching.. i love the wording and the ending.. lovely indeed!
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Can't Explain It.
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by BornReckless on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 11:38:48 PM AEST
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| You are the Saint Of Love. Cupid in disguise. |
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