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~I do not flee~
Contributed by
Loellntrepid
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Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 02:54:14 AM in AEST
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~A tainted soul unable to grow a life never to flow of this fate which can not be shown~
~A will so stilled and by that of burning blood tha heart is filled as a glare held bold while thoughts of hate unfolds and love becomes old salvation seems sold leaving only a dark dream to mold like a story infinitly retold~
~Emotions fill my mind as in submission my heart is entwined so given by that of my own created lies now fearing my soul for it surely dies~
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Re: ~I do not flee~
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by Loellntrepid on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 07:48:22 AM AEST
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~Knowing my will shall not last these days that pass leaving me broken while echoed cries of tha past so embraced only by seconds upon what is to be my ending breath~
~How fragile this life I travel to be trapped by an unseen rival now mysteries to unravel, though lost I may be but I do not flee for I know it resides inside of me~ |
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Re: ~I do not flee~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 10:14:29 PM AEST
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Another interesting piece. I cannot choose a particular part that stands out to me for the entire piece is really good and your addition in your comment made a real nice closing statement for your write. Good job
rich |
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