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Let live
Contributed by
juliestevens18
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Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 03:42:48 AM in AEST
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Please understand me when I say, I have changed for the better
My locks of hair, pulled and tightened, now soft and and aglow
The pieces that once contained me now
Lift me to a place of pure enlightenment
No change, no gain
No feelings of shame
Nothing to propose a leak in the frame
So dont hold me, hold your own body
Feel your pulse and let live
Forget about the pain
And show your all to the gift
Copyright ©
juliestevens18
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2008-06-04 03:42:48]
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Re: Let live
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 08:48:16 PM AEST
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Interesting and somewhat unsettling, (in a good way).
I really like the metaphor of tight and pulled locks of
hair, now soft and aglow. Like a soul that has been
set free ...^_^
beautifully emotive ~
~Breezy |
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