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Nightingale
Contributed by
muinanyere
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Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 08:50:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I am the Nightingale
My lover is the Moon
Upon the clouds I sail
But dawn always comes too soon
I long to be masked in black
For it is the night that I love
Hapiness is what I lack
And as I gaze upon the sky above
I sing to my lover
For I wish to be ever in his glow
And as this dream gets darker
Soon I'll have to return below
To reality's cold hard grasp
Where I dream of the night sky
But for now the darkness I enclasp
As I strectch my wings to fly
I long to reach my love but there's only so far I can go
So I sit upon the clouds
Alone in my sorrow
And as the Moolight enshrouds
I blow the Moon a kiss
And begin to slowly fade
For I belong in naught but darkness
And the day I must evade
I pull down my veil
As the night turns to Day's ember
For I am the Nightingale
And the Moon is my lover
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Re: Nightingale
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 10:22:55 PM AEST
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Vivid images you have within these words. Super job.
Deadwriter
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Re: Nightingale
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 01:33:48 AM AEST
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Wonderful write..Great analogy... Loved it
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Re: Nightingale
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 01:42:41 AM AEST
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I guess we share the same love *wink* hee hee
This is a beautiful write as always, took me a way.
My moon has been covered with rainclouds of late but I know it is there.
Hope all is well with you.
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Re: Nightingale
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 03:43:37 AM AEST
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Lovely imagery of the darkness.
A very sorrowful write, I hope your days can get brighter soon.
Take care,
Dom |
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