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Uncontrollable Love
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 12:31:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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could you please
answer me
when i am talking to you
could you at least
look at me
when you are upset
i am trying to help you
along with myself
so that you can understand
that
not everyone will love you
the way that i do
nor will ever get to that point
you're probably thinking
how can this be true
so to prove that i love you
with all my being
i will show you
in only one way how
is to show you the world
that was meant for you to see
Copyright ©
PreciousKitten
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2008-06-05 00:31:42]
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Re: Uncontrollable Love
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 01:03:32 AM AEST
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A touching write.
Some take love and toss it aside, I hope this person see's your heart.
Michelle |
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Re: Uncontrollable Love
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 02:29:55 AM AEST
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| Nice write...I hope they understand what you're telling them. |
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