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Compliments
Contributed by
Thirten
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Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 06:56:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As we compliment each other
And the other asks why Bother?
Trying to make the other see
What we see so easily
The beauty and perfection
That I recognize instantly
Seems to evade your perception
Since you so quickly disagree
Your eyes, your smile, your hair
Legs, skin, curves, and Body
I cant help but stop and stare
You're Everything i want you to be
Copyright ©
Thirten
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2008-06-05 06:56:16]
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Re: Compliments
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by Bubbles02 on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 07:05:18 AM AEST
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| I have also wondered the same thing. Why can't we just accept the fact that what we see in ourselves is not necessarily what's really there? If that makes sense? But good write. I really enjoyed it. |
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Re: Compliments
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 09:33:23 AM AEST
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interesting write.. i like the layout.. and the flow.. good job
Rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Compliments
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by SOCALGIRL on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 08:57:14 PM AEST
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| Oh gosh, I can really relate to this. |
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