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Dead Goodbye
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
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Lying here on the bathroom floor
Wrists a pretty state
Made sure I locked the door
Loneliness is my fate
The pain sinks in, occupies me
Cant take it anymore
Visions getting darker, I cant see
Breathing becomes a chore
Oh mother, I tried to recover
But the mountain would not go away
Oh Mother, Oh mother
I need to go, I need to fly
Blue lips, the ice cold kiss
Tasting the burial soil
My shell torn, I wont miss
Escape this mortal coil
This world fades to black
Im too scared but theres no turning back
I cry, I sigh, I close my eyes and die
Oh mother, I tried to recover
But the mountain would not go away
Oh Mother, Oh mother
I need to go, Need to fly
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2003-03-14 17:00:00]
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Re: Dead Goodbye
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 03:45:01 AM AEST
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wow adrian...i totally put a beat to the lyrics...its a beautifully written piece of work, but its scary....cuz i feel like that sometimes... good write...great lyrics...
Lindsey |
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Re: Dead Goodbye
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by FLTulip on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 12:50:08 PM AEST
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| Great writing! Such a sad subject though |
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Re: Dead Goodbye
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 04:16:12 AM AEST
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| excellent excellent excellent piece of work... don't ever go, so we can enjoy more of this excellent prose... blessings... |
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Re: Dead Goodbye
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:16:04 PM AEST
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excellent write, just wish i could hear it to music.
"Blue lips, the ice cold kiss
Tasting the burial soil
My shell torn, I won’t miss
Escape this mortal coil"
such powerful language and theres a really strong rhythm to this. great write, keep them coming, Kate x
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