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~ One ~
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 11:38:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I walk the streets of madness
killing is what i see
fighting and poverty
everything is a rush
everything is dirt
cloudy...
cloudy our eyes,filed with dust
that cover us with layers of mud
no one dares to lift the veil
because everyone is in a rush
swimming in layers of thick blood
rush to build fame and fortune
rush...
so I rush this world with amazement
i lifted the veil
i see the picture
i see a world of beauty
from the smallest leaf
beauty shines bright for me
smiles,
while tear drops from this madness
no one sees, no one cares
so care...
care to take a moment to reflect
our world needs our help
to join, to fight
to fight for our future
to take one step back
and heal the world,
it is our future
it is us
it is everything
that depends on us,
open your eyes
to unite,
once and for all
as One,
and peace shall come
upon all of us,
and it starts with a single
song of LOVE...
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
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2008-06-05 23:38:01]
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Re: ~ One ~
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by ruthie1983 on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 11:53:45 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, makes you think about the world and ppl around it...you reflect on your own lifestyles...great poem |
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Re: ~ One ~
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 01:15:28 AM AEST
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Love has always been stronger than hate.
Humankind justs needs to learn the focus of it.
Nice write. |
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Re: ~ One ~
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by elle on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 01:54:10 AM AEST
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| Great deal involved in this madness & rushing & caring. . .everything always leads back to love. great write. peace elle. |
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Re: ~ One ~
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 01:17:48 AM AEST
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You are totally correct in what you say. We need to care , all of us.
Yet, there are so many people who don't care and they still outnumber the ones that do.
Nice work
Steve |
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