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Morning sleep
Contributed by
humphdj
on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 08:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The morning petals open
As they settles in to place
And I look down beside me
To drink your morning grace
The petals treat you kindly
As they light upon your face
Emblazon you translucent
And my feelings for you race
Your name is on my anxious lips
But my breath is held so tight
I cannot even whisper it
So let you end your night
To watch you in the morning
In wonder I delight
Then waste away my daytimes
Looking forward to the night
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humphdj
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2002-07-11 20:11:08]
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Re: Morning sleep
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 10:14:33 PM AEST
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This is a truly beautiful poem, passionate and romantic....lost for words really..
Chrissie x |
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Re: Morning sleep
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by lilsmurfy on
Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 05:34:52 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful and wonderfully written ..lovely write :) |
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Re: Morning sleep
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by Carrie on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 01:36:40 AM AEST
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| How perfectly this captures that blissful feeling of awakening with the one you love most in the world! Beautiful. |
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Re: Morning sleep
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by Patricia_Petro on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 11:30:44 PM AEST
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Wow...this IS a beautiful poem. Very romantic.
~Patricia |
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