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seasons. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 02:53:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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when i kissed you
in the springtime. . .
by fall, I'd lost control.
our summer filled
with aggrigate.
the winters'
cold, forlorn.
had I known,
would I have taken
such a pleasant
turn at love?
if I'd known
always the fading
languishing
within the bud. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2008-06-07 02:53:11]
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Re: seasons. . .
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 04:00:32 AM AEST
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I loved the style of this it is also very pretty..
Michelle |
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Re: seasons. . .
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 05:17:34 AM AEST
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| This poem takes you so many places/emotions. Great write.........Mike |
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Re: seasons. . .
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by Spike on
Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 10:02:09 AM AEST
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elle,
a beautiful, almost whimsical exposition of the turn of the heart through the metaphor of seasons.
I think we willingly embrace denial of the inevitable, in order to succumb to the bliss of the emotional hit. Damn. That makes me a love junkie...
S. |
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