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Wordless promise
Contributed by
holy
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Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 08:12:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Wordless promise
For a wordless promise,
I was in a silence following you.
when you were tired,vexed,
or restless,
I was your greatest company always.
For a unspoken promise,
I will still be in a silence to following you.
wherever you go,
whatever you do,
I will always be your dearest wife.
Love is a special promise in silence,
all our stories will flash in our memories.
Love is a speechless promise,
with all the day of our life,
I will tell all our love stories.
I am always so full of life,
I am always so full of hope,
because I am used to all the cold weather,
despite all these discouragements,
I refused to give up.
This is why,
the alive embers of a former passion can still be seen in my articles.
Yes,
wordless promise,
wordless following,
silent company,
silent love,
all these,
I would like.
Yes,
I am the strong and silent type,
and I have good taste.
You know,
I dislike the adventurous life,
I enjoy a more peaceful domestic life,
but,
I want everybody to know,
our love is finally winning,
and every story about our love is very interesting.
Copyright ©
holy
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2008-06-07 20:12:06]
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Re: Wordless promise
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 11:20:03 PM AEST
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You got that right, Holy. Every story IS very interesting. A beautiful write this is...
You have surely come a long way...
Hugs
Your Big Sister...Jenni |
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Re: Wordless promise
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 02:21:03 AM AEST
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It's encouraging to see how well you express yourself, without falling into repetitive clichés. I wish more poets today were able to do that consistently (myself included). Keep it up!
I found the fourth stanza very encouraging.
- Andrew |
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