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One Last Breath
Contributed by
undead_poet14
on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He was a lost soul
Wandering, searing for a purpose
He found it
At a record store
Opal Wray
A name fit for an angel
His love for her burned deeper everyday
No sign of ever fading
Her soft voice like a nightingales
Sitting beside her
Just staring at her perfect face
Total bliss in such a smiple moment
Stattered
Risking his own
To save his gem, Opal
Lying down, staring up in pain
Opal Wary by his side
Holding hands, he departs
With one last breath
Harvey is gone
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2003-03-14 21:00:00]
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Re: One Last Breath
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 09:12:30 PM AEST
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Nice writing style.
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