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Lieutenant Friend
Contributed by
ZiggyB
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Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 03:47:45 PM in AEST
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Lieutenant Friend
And then there is Lt. Friend
Up and down, the back stairs again
Its to that stogie, hes left on the ledge
To last all day must be his pledge
Now of the Island, he had been bereft
Where he was back before he left
But with his same consistent style
Hed grin and bear it, with that big smile
Both kind and gentle, this we know
And water from his back would flow
Just like a duck, it is okay
Bad weather? Its just another day
Think not of this, as an old wives tale
Hell tell you himself, about the fire sale
How it makes no sense to sit around ailing
So he grabs the cooler, and sets out sailing
For him, this holds some special highs
And upon the waters is where he flies
It seems the place, which he loves best
This sanctuary, to put the mind to rest
~~*~~
2008-05-16
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ZiggyB
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Re: Lieutenant Friend
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 05:08:00 PM AEST
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This is a great write for your friend. Sounds like a fun guy.
Deadwriter
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Re: Lieutenant Friend
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 01:06:40 AM AEST
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Nice tribute, he does sound like a wonderful man.
I bet he will enjoy this write and smile.
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Re: Lieutenant Friend
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 07:35:44 AM AEST
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| must agree great write here, i just loved how your lines told a story and an interesting one as well, your rhyming was spot on and your flow was brilliant, i love at the end how he sets sail and is free, i could feel the releigf o fsetting out to sea, great writing keep it up!!! |
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Re: Lieutenant Friend
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:40:15 AM AEST
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Guys like these make working fun..and help you get through the day. Lovely tribute to Lt...
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