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Olafs Odyssey
Contributed by
philiphemsby
on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 08:04:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Part 1
A generations trade
generated! yes, neptunes favour!
but 'nary a bounty at no cost
a harsh lesson, uncle borjn now lost!
Part2
the scented breeze smells like fish
hark! the gruff Norwegian!
he looks forlorn, many miles from Klepp
Part 3
A startled look through my blurry vision
"Egad" says Per, he spies a collision
A bang and a bump up yonder fjord
The whole in the floor cannae be ignored
Part 4
the scented breeze smells like fish
hark! the gruff Norwegian!
he looks forlorn, many miles from Klepp
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2008-06-10 20:04:57]
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Re: Olafs Odyssey
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 12:56:10 AM AEST
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I have not read anything like this. Unique write.
It left a lot of vivid images dancing in my head while reading.
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