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Spring Mail
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 12:50:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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spring is here flowers are blooming... rapidly like my heart opening its seed of love,
Im a single flower amongst the garden of daffodils... waving goodbye, so I can welcome the arrival of pansies,
I stand and gaze amongst them and your eyes dont seem to match... the tint of their leaf dissolve before my eyes,
as i stand, and remain content knowing the wind flies... your true fragrance touching my flower caressing every part,
through my soul is where I lay my flower open letting the wind lift its fragrance... and carry it back to lay it on your chest,
to touch the depths of a heart that seems so true... like no one ever dared to love you,
to lay all of its sent safely on your heart... tightly sealing it with a kiss of my love
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
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2008-06-11 00:50:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Spring Mail
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 12:54:24 AM AEST (User
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This poem is a breath of spring........ Lovely work.
This is so delicate
I lay my flower open
letting the wind lift it’s fragrance...
and carry it back
to lay it on your chest,
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Re: Spring Mail
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 01:40:55 AM AEST (User
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Absolutely beautiful....Loved this...
Jenni |
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Re: Spring Mail
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 07:39:56 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful write. I love the last line....
tightly sealing it with a kiss
of my love…
Mike |
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