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My brother
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 05:54:32 AM in AEST
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this is about something my older brother did yesterday. there is no love loss between us i really don't care for him and i know thats terrible but he always upsets my mom and family. Yesterday he got in a fight with his ex and then with my other brother and ended up getting the law called on us. but anyway this is what i think of him
Stupidity knows no bounds.
It's like a gun that never runs out of rounds.
But a man that holds the gun.
Will never stop firing until we're all done.
He is my brother.
and his stupidity is going to be the death of my mother.
He always argues
Him and his ex always fight.
Mom always tells him it's not right.
But he doesn't care.
He'll never realize that he's the one ruining our lives.
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Re: My brother
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 06:44:25 AM AEST
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I can feel the passion and hurt in the voice of your words. I am sorry this is happening. It is such a waste when family cannot get along. I am going through same thing. Different circumstance but my family is not talking at all........ There is fighting in all families but there is such thing as fighting fair and being done with it and moving on right??
Good write
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Re: My brother
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 09:32:10 AM AEST
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| i fight with my dad so did my brother honestly i was always on my bro's side he seemed more right if you know what i mean but my father he is a very controlling person and it annoys everyone so your poem made me question. . . should i just go along with it? |
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Re: My brother
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 03:21:16 PM AEST
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Michelle is right. I wonder if we all have a toxic person in our family. All I can say is, "back away."
Distance is your only protecction. Once you distance yourself, you'll be able to breath again.
Your mom will have to do the same for her sanity. My mom has a saying:
:People treat you the way you let them." Sad but true.
Your poem displays your anger and hurt . That makes it a good poem in my book.
Good luck,
~Me~ |
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Re: My brother
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 06:30:20 PM AEST
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Sad write. Sorry he is making it a fight that involves your whole family. If you need a sounding board, Shoot me a pm.
Deadwriter
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