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~CLOSE TO THEE~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 09:48:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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~~^~~
Yes, my friend,
I know it's hard for you..
My wanting, hoping, waiting...
Always seeming to be baiting..
As I reach out in a way
That fills you with fear.
Once upon a time I kept my life hidden
deep inside my pockets for none to see.
No one to touch, or hurt or tell.
Yet already you know me so well.
I trust you so much,
That I hold it all out for you to touch and see
Knowing that you would never hurt me.
It's all right, my friend, it's okay.
I know you'll stay while you can,
Then you'll go, and I'll grow,
And I'll probably cry for a while.
Fear not, sweet friend, don't flee,
I only want to be close to thee.
~~^~~
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Jenni_K
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2008-06-11 09:48:43]
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Re: ~CLOSE TO THEE~
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 05:35:05 PM AEST
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Jenni,
I hope your friend understands how special you are and decides to stay close for as long as they can. They in time will see how much joy you add to peoples lives. Great write my friend.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~CLOSE TO THEE~
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by Supercreep on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 05:54:34 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed this. It's not easy to write poems about deep emotions especially those of love and admiration without sounding slushy. Well done. |
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Re: ~CLOSE TO THEE~
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by holy on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 07:52:59 PM AEST
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Good evening, my dear sister, how is everything there? miss you so much.
You always do your best in your poems, I love them and copy them well....... |
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