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So long and good Night to you!
Contributed by
Craze
on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 11:59:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There was just so much I wanted to say,
But when we are face to face it all goes away,
Is it fear or is it love,
Maybe just the lack of...heart,
These unspoken words are tearing me apart,
What do I say, where do I start,
Even with no chance,
I'll still glance,
Your beauty still captures me,
Sets my restless soul free,
Let me die,
Let me cry,
Let me wonder why,
Let me bleed,
Let my pain feed,
Let my hate breed,
Let my incompetence show,
Let the whole world know,
That given the chance I'm bound to blow,
Even facing hell,
These secrets I'll never tell,
Still under your spell,
Let me slide this razor blade,
Let me fade,
Life for death let me trade,
For eternity let me sleep,
Let me fall into the deep,
These sins let me keep,
Then again you probably wouldn't care,
For me a moment you wouldn't spare,
As I fade into the night,
With you on my mind I don't even fight,
Now I feel right,
In peace I hope to lay I just might,
Find some peace,
These memories might cease to exist.
Copyright ©
Craze
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2008-06-11 23:59:16]
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Re: So long and good Night to you!
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 12:29:49 AM AEST
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Craze,
Powerful Powerful emotions pour from this. This has to be made known to the person to keep you from exploding. Even if you are totally rejected, it will be expressed and off your chest. Superb write.
Deadwriter
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