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Blood Red Rose
Contributed by
Immortal-Dragon21
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Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 11:59:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Blood Red Rose
All of those dreams they fall to the side
Like discarded polaroids of our promised days
Those days upon pictures painted
Hang from the halls of our memories
Life was so precious and we held it in our hearts
So delicate, like a glass the slightest breeze could shatter
You had it all and yet you were so foolish, so vain
You took him from us and dare to smile false smiles at me
But now fortune favours me, as i stand here above you
The look of fear in your eyes is intoxicating
And your whimpering is like sweet demented music
Swimming in my head
No longer will you go on with painted smiles
Your pearl white skin will be painted a disgusting red
Then from behind me i grasp the long slender finger of iron
As i raise it high i see his face and shed a tear
DIE *****!!! the sickening wet thwack of iron
As it sinks over and over into your skull
This beautiful melody of carnage excites me
Look at how beautiful you are now
This is how you die there is no big ceremony just a hole in the dirt
And the psalms of the crickets as they sing your requiem
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Re: Blood Red Rose
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 12:03:10 AM AEST
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Shivers, you gave me a chill with this one.
It is fringed with deep darkness. The ending also chilling. Great write.
Remind me not to make you mad!
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Re: Blood Red Rose
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by reeree on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 12:14:18 AM AEST
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