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im scared
Contributed by
-Nik-91-
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Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 03:20:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i found some one i like
but there is just one problem
im scared to fall inlove
cause i dont want to get hurt again
how do you over come this scaredness
because it doesnt seem to be going away
it gets stronger everyday
as the time goes by
as each day i like you even more
scared of what will happen if i get too close
im scared that one day you will decide you dont want me
and just go away after you got what you want
after you used me and made me feel ashamed of myself
i dont know are you likethat or are you that 1 in 6 billion
that is true
i dont want to fall inlove
if your just going to break my heart
cause this time i dont think i can be as strong
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Re: im scared
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 06:52:12 PM AEST
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This shows your past pain and present fear really well..but you have to try to forget the past..or you'll never be happy..
In line 5..I would use the word, "fear" in place of scaredness... just my opinion...
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Re: im scared
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 11:33:05 PM AEST
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| i agry with jenni on the use of fear instead of scaredness but all in all a good write |
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Re: im scared
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 01:19:51 AM AEST
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| agree* haha sorry bout that |
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