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simple things..
Contributed by
jnep
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Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 08:20:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The shimmers of light dance, as the shadows roam free
I can only dream about a singular moment so dear to me.
An angelic voice awakens me, and my life begins anew.
The shroud is pulled back and all i see is you.
I tread so much darkness, but you help me with every step
As I long for your voice which leaves me without breath.
crimson flowers, rose petals, couldnt hold a candle to you.
As I see you smile, everything in this world seems so true.
The hands of time are against me, and i pray someday you will know.
On how truly special you are, when you captured my heart and set it aglow.
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jnep
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2008-06-13 20:20:23]
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Re: simple things..
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by Supercreep on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 08:44:14 PM AEST
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Romantic in the old sense of the word, without any cynisism or irony. Especially like the line
'crimson flowers, rose petals, couldnt hold a candle to you'.
it is very visual and vivid. If you do get a chance to see my stuff and like it, why not check out my music on :
http://www.myspace.com/redskingdom
cheers,
SC
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