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Another roadside Fatality (the ghost)
Contributed by
robinkrystal
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Saturday, 14th June 2008 @ 02:26:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The look in his eyes The anger growing through He throws a fist of anger The blow lands square and true
The ghost grabs her coat Runs across the floor Twists the knob And slams the door
The blistering cold of winter The roads all slicked with ice I sometimes slip and stumble Why tonight of all the winter nights?
I look up to see the headlights I hear the squeal of brakes My gaze stares through the window See the surprise thats on his face
He tried to turn the wheel But his timing was too late There wasnt even a chance Than he could get that car straight
The ghost lies in the snow Feeling like her stomach has been wrung Completely unaware Of the damage that has been done
She goes to see the doctor Concerned that shes been hurt He looks at her so sadly And tell her the damage was not to her
A piece of herself A baby that will never cry Nine weeks of never to be seen beauty A child that never got to live to die
The ghost of a person Takes a taxi home Arriving there only to find That ghosts only want to be alone Her husband unaware Yells at her from the next room Words of hate and anger Further darkening her gloom
Confused by her emotions he attacks her Unleashing blow after blow She tries to shield her pain She tries to let him know
He ignores her every word The ghost again runs out onto the road Headlights quick approaching The car never even slowed
The pain numbing her emotions Losing grip on a harsh reality A new pain filled morphine Another roadside fatality
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Re: Another roadside Fatality (the ghost)
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 14th June 2008 @ 03:48:11 AM AEST (User
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You captured every sense of my being here, striking a nerve or two along the journey of this write.
It is a well written verse, a verse very real and alive to me and so darn sad.
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Re: Another roadside Fatality (the ghost)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alisteal_Rayne on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 05:52:58 PM AEST (User
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wow. There are no words that can describe this poem. Wonderful write |
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Re: Another roadside Fatality (the ghost)
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 12:45:43 PM AEST (User
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For the life of me, I will never understand why.
Why there is such violence in a relationship born of love...why the brutalized always seem to return to the scene of the crime. I have seen it happen with both genders again and again and I just don't get it. Love is not something that you get bruises as prizes!
Eh...enough soapboxing. Good read, this!
thanks for sharing |
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