|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Math Lessons For A Moth
Contributed by
reprobate
on
Saturday, 14th June 2008 @ 09:45:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
So soft and lovely to the sight
In the dark, warm and bright
Wanting love and didn't care
Should've known danger's there
Drawn to you by love's desire
Flew too close to that fatal fire
Loving you forced me to learn
Holding the flame will just burn
Sincerely wanting you as my wife
I dreamed of you with me for life
Truly thought that meant only us
To add him was extremely callous
Three will never a couple make
And I'm alone for the math's sake
No place for me in that equation
So pain grows instead of elation
Watching all my dreams dissolve
Love's a problem I can't resolve
Singed wings left me wishing to die
Should've flew away to the open sky
Copyright ©
reprobate
... [
2008-06-14 21:45:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Math Lessons For A Moth
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 05:05:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Intriguing title and creative analogy, R. The moth will ever and always
be drawn to that which could ultimately be a fated end. There is no logic
to his desire and thus will never understand math. Good thought provoking
write. LOVE the last line, especially! :)
~Breezy |
|
|
Re: Math Lessons For A Moth
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 07:39:34 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
omg! sooo sadly beautiful, excellent write!
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
