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I wanna go home
Contributed by
smilin_eyes
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Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 11:47:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I can feel its the end,
I dont know why,
But I only see rain on the
sunshine flooded sky.
Take me where its safe,
take me where I can hide,
Take me where the shore,
welcomes every tide.
I wanna go home,
somewhere quiet,
I wanna go home,
so that I can sleep tonight.
Tell them the kitten is lost,
it lost its way,
Tell them anything,
please just take me away.
The noise in my head,
can you hear it too?
Can someone talk louder,
I wanna block 'em for a moment or two.
No, but take me home,
take me where I can cry,
Take me where theres someone who,
knows the reason without asking me why.
I'm leaving my previous home,
even though I had paid the rent,
I cant live around walls,
made of withering fake cement.
So I wanna go home,
and I know Ill find it someday,
But I wouldnt even leave this one,
if I had room in it to stay.
Copyright ©
smilin_eyes
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2008-06-15 11:47:03]
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Re: I wanna go home
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by Spike on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 05:55:19 PM AEST
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Nice one, smilin.
Yeah, I know these sentiments intimately.
Take me where the shore,
welcomes every tide.
Exquisite lines.
Spike
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Re: I wanna go home
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by spooky on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 07:30:03 PM AEST
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I know the pain and sorrow I've been there and always will,,
a friend in words spooky |
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Re: I wanna go home
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by deadwriter on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 10:07:40 PM AEST
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A very nice write. I hope you find peace in your new home.
Deadwriter
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Re: I wanna go home
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 09:57:13 AM AEST
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| it's nice and intresting i dunno about the second to last stanza iono maybe it's just me |
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