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The Feeling
Contributed by
breezyweezy
on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 08:00:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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its a feeling everyone waits for
let it surround you
even let it take control
the ambition it takes
to take it away
is far tooo great to anticipate
before you know it, it bursts to life
and has a mind of its own
your heart beats
BUMP BUMP, BUMP BUMP more rapidly
as it takes control
you dont do anything too stop it
because its too wonderful
of a feeling
the feeling itself is love
i dare you to endure
without letting it take control
Copyright ©
breezyweezy
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2008-06-15 20:00:26]
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Re: The Feeling
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by spooky on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 08:03:56 PM AEST
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sometimes it hard to take, even if you search for it, sometimes it's even blind for a person who see's,,
a friend in words,,,spooky |
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Re: The Feeling
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 08:50:35 PM AEST
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Truer words have not been written.... Good write..
Jenni |
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Re: The Feeling
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 07:06:32 AM AEST
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| Love can be described in so many ways, yet this describes a feeling so true. Like a warm pool you never want to get out of.............Mike |
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