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Stars
Contributed by
jessb3
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Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 12:04:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Emerging from my havens light
I take each step with care
Surrounded by the black of night
And caught within its snare
I pause to drink the stillness in
And take a look around
A cool breeze gently strokes my skin
I cannot hear a sound
I think back to the task at hand
The reason why I'm there
I gaze up at a sky so grand
I lose myself and stare
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Re: Stars
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by shelby on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 04:52:48 AM AEST
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Beautiful flow to this. There is nothing better than laying on the grass and looking at the stars, it is so peaceful.
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Re: Stars
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by SilverRain on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 01:49:49 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written. Gentle yet powerful. Well done! |
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Re: Stars
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by mecatpurrson on
Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 02:46:58 AM AEST
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I'm so happy to find another rhyming poet, I was beginning to think there were none!
Your poem is great. I love your choice of words and the rhythm is perfect.
Your last line is so true. Not only of the stars but of the hills and the sea. All bring a kind of calm that you can get lost in. |
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