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A forest by night and day
Contributed by
kelly_may
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Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 05:01:11 PM in AEST
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walking through the sea of green the dark colors do look mean.
the rustle os branches and wisper of wind. the chill of rain and a winding path down a dark lane.
it twists and turns again and again until i no longer hear the sound of rain.
the cry of a creature of the night the distant scuffle of some far off fight.
birds take flight in to the night with no fear or fright.
the twinkle of stars the glow of the moon this forest so diffrent from this afternoon.
the sky turns a milky pink the black ink of night starts to sink.
the sun now shines in the sky way up high where birds fly.
and that is how the night dose die
by kelly moran
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kelly_may
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2008-06-18 17:01:11]
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Re: A forest by night and day
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by shelby on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 03:02:30 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
This is a beautiful write. Nice start.
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Re: A forest by night and day
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by mecatpurrson on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:36:50 AM AEST
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| Nicely done. You are very good with your descriptions. I love "the rustle of branches and whisper of wind." |
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